silence we shared…

it was while you were sleeping

that i stood by the door

secretly peeking

as the moon

cast its white sheen

on your dreamy face

it was while you were sleeping

that i felt

the softness of your cheeks

the smile on your face

the ruffled hair

messed up in the pillow

it was while you were sleeping

that i whispered in your ear

and something twinkled in my eye

i smiled to myself

i don’t know why…

it was while you were sleeping

that a song came along

being played outside

somewhere in the distance

into the dark night

it was while you were sleeping

that i ran out of words

stared out the window

while the moon hung in the sky

i sat there praying

for the night to last long

p.s i have no idea where this came from : /


38 thoughts on “silence we shared…

  1. <>“it was while you were sleepingthat i ran out of wordsstared out the windowwhile the moon hung in the skyi sat there prayingfor the night to last long”<>You took me away with those.

  2. For someone who says she doesn’t understand love, atleast you’re taking a step into the realms of love and accessories…congratulations…Lol…though mubi lets be honest isn’t this is a little cheesy?

  3. MJ says:

    specy, thanks mha, lol. i tried keeping it off the cheesy track :p and hey you are telling me i am being cheesy? take a look at ur fb status dude :p

  4. MJ says:

    smiley, aw thanks girl! Ubee, um well ya you cant ‘right’ the way i ‘write’ :p desi,aw thats such a nice way to put it:D

  5. Han na to i am all cheesy and btw facebook is separate stuff lol…and i only said i’m in love, i didn’t say i’m in love and i cant sleep and i watch you sleeping and the moonlight on your face :p…sorry couldn’t resist

  6. MJ says:

    @ mha, even if it is a separate thing, the cheesy factor remains.and i think you are forgetting all the comments you wrote there,that adds to the ‘cheeziness’ :p at least i have contained ‘cheesy’ to a genre of literature 😀

  7. Btw i really like your dp wait till i accessorize my wrist you’re gonna burn…i’m looking for a perfect dp somehow i cant bring myself to replace this one its such a sweet memory 😦

  8. <>“it was while you were sleepingthat i ran out of wordsstared out the windowwhile the moon hung in the skyi sat there prayingfor the night to last long”<>this last stanza is the most beautiful one

  9. MJ says:

    @ mha, :S you like my style? :p thanks…and lol no way, i m not gona burn if a guy is going to accessorize his wrist :p so go ahead, work on it..and ya your current dp..its cuteZee, hmm seems like the last one has worked for most of you 😀 thanks

  10. I love how you don’t know where this came from, it reminds me of me- I write stuff that doesn’t always come from emotions of my own. They’re snippets of lives around me which I feel that my words can relate to.Make sense?🙂

  11. I’d paste the last stanza here laikin udhar zyada acha lag raha hai. =sI’m confused now. =|~ Sorry. Lol!Yes! The last stanze was awesome. Esp the last two line. WEeeeeeeeeeeooooooo o_OI like the new header. =D And the clour. =D~

  12. I like your style is a dialogue you’re such a tubelight, i hate explaining one liners…anyways, hmmm, how about i accessorize my goatee? You’ll burn then? Lol…atleast hfm you cant grow a goatee, neither you…haina?? i’m at an advantage there…but yes mubi you guessed it i wanted you to praise my picture…:p :p…Acha Nae Nae i was still thinking k kya karun kon c pic lagaoon.

  13. MJ says:

    rainy, exactly! you have put it the right way for me 😀beaugly, thanks for noticing the header 😀 mha, you are so mean :/ as for you ‘goats’ and ‘cows’:S do you realize that girls would have no interest if you accessorize it or not :s and ya stick to the post, would appreciate that 😀

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  15. Calm Cool says:

    hello from me, after a long gap 🙂first of all: good dp.second: nice post, i wish i could express my feelings too in such a beautiful way.third: “One ship sails East, and another west”thought provoking! n pretty in the sense of ur font color selection n pic .n finaly see ya 🙂

  16. MJ says:

    Dee, thanks!Ghazala, thanks 🙂calm, good to see you:) thanks for the dp, the posts 😀cavalier, hehe you have made my day. and welcome to the blog 😀saadil, 🙂 keep visiting

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