The lost wind caged in a bubble…

A long battle had been fought…
A voice, distant and tired, thoughtfully asked: “what battle?”

Reality came crashing down on the rotten, lifeless menagerie. Menageries are lifeless, glass, tiny…..insignificant.

“There was no war, there was no action. The sounds and screams, the blood and flesh was all part of the game.”
who won?
“who won what?” the distant and dry voice inquired.
Impatiently she replied- “the game you mentioned “— silence, a pin dropped and echoed in the skies, among the clouds….and the glass broke. The sound felt like a melody- quick rain of tiny shattered glass came down….silence
“the game is not finished…”
can i come too?
The menagerie’s fragile voice faded behind the sound of the game….
no winners, no losers…only fools

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19 thoughts on “The lost wind caged in a bubble…

  1. A long battle had been fought… A voice, distant and tired, thoughtfully asked: “what battle?” Reality came crashing down on the rotten, lifeless menagerie. Menageries are lifeless, glass, tiny…..insignificant. “There was no war, there was no action. The sounds and screams, the blood and flesh was all part of the game.”who won?“who won what?” the distant and dry voice inquired.Impatiently she replied- “the game you mentioned “— silence, a pin dropped and echoed in the skies, among the clouds….and the glass broke. The sound felt like a melody- quick rain of tiny shattered glass came down….silence“the game is not finished…”can i come too? The menagerie’s fragile voice faded behind the sound of the game…. no winners, no losers…only foolsI copied and pasted it for those who can’t be bothered.I really think that is an emotion we all experience but can’t express as well as you have.

  2. P.S Don’t you mean ‘caged’ in your title?Sorry to be such a spelling bee, but thought it was just a silly typo you might like to change.🙂

  3. MJ says:

    seher, i dont think we really understand..or if we do, we easily let it slip..smacula, thank youexquisite,,i like the shocker 😉abdlsy, hmm indeed very thoughtful of you, khair mubarakmha, thanksdaanish, i was thinking ‘wild wind’ would have been more appropriate, what say?UTP, hehe, i think i will take your comment as a compliment!rickety, thank you for visiting my blog 🙂 hope to see more of youDee, 🙂rainy, oo thank you so much for pointing that out.m glad you are a spelling bee and that reminds me i once lost my spelling competition lol :$beaugly, 😐

  4. Calm Cool says:

    i really liked it, its sort of … ummm… ok i give up, i can’t find words rite now it made me so thoughtful :$agreed to hfm :”I really think that is an emotion we all experience but can’t express as well as you have.”

  5. MJ says:

    calm. hehehe did it really make you think :p :$azra, thanks to exquisite for the banner and thanks to me too since i chose this one from among the ones he made 😀 😀 to the one who clicked on the ‘funny’ reaction option for this post :S umm really? this post could qualify for absurd or disturbing but funny? ;p

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